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Review:academica says:
This was wonderful. Hauntingly beautiful and very sad, and so well-written. I really love your use of second person here. It makes Draco's words very personal, and they really cut into me, almost as if he were speaking directly to me, except I was Pansy. Anyway, this just goes to show that you wrote very effectively. You instilled authentic feelings in the reader.

The imagery was fantastic. I have this mental juxtaposition of Pansy as a delicate, pretty flower and then as a powerful woman, all grown up and facing the tragedies of life. The inclusion of the little girls' game adds another layer to the effect you've created. That is, the thing reads with a superficial layer of innocence and a deeper darkness underneath. Your words had me dizzy, and I loved it!

So simple, yet so effective. Very well done! :)

academica

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for the amazing review! Not only is your writing amazing, but your reviews just make me sit in awe. Thanks for the swap! :)

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