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Review:EpiskeyPM says:
You asked for ideas, so here's one :) I thought I posted this a while ago but I guess it didn't go through. Anyhoo, a while ago I had a dream and I think it could go with this. Once they were in the Ministry, Harry's polyjuice potion was the first one to wear off; he was pretty much under the cloak the whole time, so he was carefully trailing behind Ron and Hermione the entire time. I forgot exactly how, but they all got separated and Harry found Hermione first, but her polyjuice potion was beginning to wear off too and the only way to save her from getting captured by the Muggle-Born administration people was to reveal himself by coming out from under the cloak so she could hide until she could figure out what to do. I dunno, you don't have to use it, but it's just an idea :) Great writing as always, the only thing I'd say is that it's going along with the books a bit too much.

Author's Response: Wow!! thanks so much! yes I was little upset no one was suggesting any thing, especially since I you all want this story updated as asap as I do lol. That's exactly why I was asking for ideas, I want to start breaking off from Deathly Hallows already because this is not meant to be a rewrite of it exactly. You have no idea how thankful I am as I have been hopelessly stuck with this chapter. *virtual hug*

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