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Review:priyam says:
I dont really understand if this is a HP fanfiction. They are not muggle spies!!! they are aurors. They dont need to blend in to get information. They can easily put an imperior curse and make them do whatever they want. They can control them and thus the whole organization!!! They can even oblivate them and make forget about magic altogather. No muggle is a match for a wizard especially if he is a trained auror. Why on earth would Scorpius have to go to egypt! He can easily confund them in a blink of an eye. I cant help but wonder are you even a HP fan?

Author's Response: what a strange ending question! I can understand what you are saying but this is the world I have created - this story is about power and fear and doing what is right. i don't believe for a second that, in this new world, post-voldemort, that wizards would just up and use mind-control on their enemies! the thing is, they are thinking of the future - thinking of how things will be with the two worlds combined and having wizards do what you are suggesting would not make a very good start for relationships between muggles and wizards. perhaps you have never thought of these things, i don't know, but there are politics at play here. the point is that wizards are striving to NOT be like muggles and just throw down and use their abilities to make muggles fear them even more. perhaps you missed the point of this story?

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