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Review:Chocolate_Frog says:
Interesting chapter so far, a good continuation of the last. The Regulus bit was quite unexpected... Hmm... Elsa is in a pretty complicated relationship wiht the Black brothers... I wonder how everyone else would react?

Speaking of reactions, I think the incident with Alice wasn't that major, so why did it snowball into all of Gryffindor hating her? That part doesn't make much sense to me...

Oh, and I also caught a few mistakes, such as:

The 'Marauders' as they called themselves, and I, had only a small history.

^ The commas are placed wrong... you should actually add one after "Marauders" and remove the one after "I".

I'm interested in what will happen next! ^^

~Khanh

Author's Response: You know, since I started writing this two years ago, I really have to agree about the Alice thing. It's not realistic, but all I can justify it with is that maybe it's just Elsa's perception of what everyone else is thinking? I don't know. Thanks for the input!

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