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Review:Atomic says:
Hi there, it's Atomic with your review. So sorry it took me so long! School had me all tied up unfortunately.

You definitely don't need to be worried about the characterization. You're doing a great job with them, and I love the relationship between Victoire and Teddy. I normally don't like Victoire/Teddy ships because everyone just jumps into the story with them already dating and it can be quite dull. I'm glad you've decided to actually set them up and develop their relationship.

As for dialogue, I loved it. It was very realistic and I don't feel like you had too much of it at all. The overall chapter was quite long though, for the amount of action involved.

It was still a great beginning though! Definitely looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! :) I'm glad you're liking it thus far!

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