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Review:Beeezie says:
Oooh, this is intriguing! I can't wait to read more! I love this sort of murder mystery.

Two tiny things: there were a few points that you used a comma rather than a period around dialogue (for example, in the fifth-to-last paragraph, a period should follow "confused," not a comma, and in the fourth-to-last paragraph, there should be a period after "sheepishly" rather than a comma. Also, in the third-to-last paragraph, I believe "If so, who's?" should be "If so, whose?" (Sorry. I'm a bit mechanics-obsessed.)

Other than that, awesome job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love murder mysteries too! So much!

I'll fix those mistakes as soon as possible. :)

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