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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
If there's one pairing that I am completely iffy about reading - it's Dramiones, which is why I've skipped around on your author's page and read all the non-Dramiones you have written. So when I came here intent on reviewing another story, I found I had little choice in the matter and so, here I am.

And you know what? For a pairing that I find hard to swallow, mostly due to the ridiculous manner in which people pair them up, I adored this story. I think what helps is that this takes place so long after Hogwarts, that they've had time to grow up and to change, especially Malfoy. It's hard to picture them as a couple set during their Hogwarts years because of what we've seen of Draco's character, but I think after the war and living as adults, there's definitely room for maturation and to see people in a different light. That works for you here.

That instant connection between them is brilliant and their kiss? I could feel the fire burning, from that first spark to the blaze that consumed Hermione when their lips met. *fans self* Deliciously done.

I love how seamlessly you intertwined the flashbacks as she walked down the aisle towards Ron. I think it really gave us the opportunity to see how Draco and Hermione's relationship progressed and how they still struggled to come to grips with it, even years after Hogwarts and the war - they have to fight against the prejudice that had been so present in their younger years.

I definitely was NOT expecting Draco to object! But I liked it. I'm happy that he showed up and that Hermione could be with him. She seems happy with Ron, content, even, but she doesn't share the passion that was evident in her relationship with Draco. So for a non-Dramione shipper, I was rooting for them from the start.

As usual, your descriptions are fantastic too. I love the imagery at the beginning, especially. I love how you mentioned Hermione wearing "virginal white". You didn't say that she was just simply wearing white, but giving us the idea that she's this innocent, young woman though she's not. It's kind of like a rebirth, you know? I'm not sure if that makes any sense...

Anyway, I don't think I'll be a die-hard Dramione shipper but I'm definitely a bit more open-minded to the relationship, especially if they're all as well-written and executed as exceptionally as this. Well done. :)

Author's Response: Ohhh, look at you! Liking some Dramione! :) I'm so happy that my evil plan to convert everyone to worship the Dramione idol!!! MWAHAHAHAHA!

*cough* Excuse me.

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this here story and appreciate it for the amount of time and love I put into it. I'm so happy to have found that you enjoyed my descriptions and writing as I have great admiration for yours! :)


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