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Review:SeverusSnape15 says:
Hello there, Cierra here with your review. Thanks for entering my challenge, first off.

I think this story has very good potential, but I did find it VERY confusing. The time changes just jumped at the wrong times, in my opinion. I'd love to have seen it smoother, and less abrupt.

It captured the meaning of the poem PERFECTLY, though. I love the ending, it was sweet. I didn't feel any emotion at all, though, because we didn't get to know Alexzander and Katerina at all. Sure, she got left a few times, but it didn't bring much emotion because I couldn't get to know her very well.

So, those are just the things that I think could use some work on. But, I do think you captured the poem perfectly. Thank you for entering my challenge.

Author's Response: HI! I just think I should let you know that this story was originally a short story but i realised that it as short enough to be a one-shot so i made it that instead but thanks for reading anyhow and i'm glad i got the poem right :)

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