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Review:StEpH_M says:
It was amazing!
I loved how much Percy has changed from the last chapter, he really stepped up and showed that his family was more important to him then anyone else. They fact that he would risk his life just to know whether his sister was safe really is a special thing to have.
I also love the lines 'You’ve made it fairly clear by coming here that you don’t have much to lose anymore.”
“But he does!” snapped Percy. Could Aberforth not see that, or was he just being purposefully instigative? “They all do!”' that in the end, even when he wants to get out. To go home he doesn't not because of Pride, because he want's to keep his family safe and sound, well as sound as they can be as traitors.
I also liked Aberforth in this, he is just as stubborn here as he is in the books, and just as caring when he 'tests' to see if you are actually worthy of such information and also trust worthy. He really is a caring guy, even if it's impossible to see.
I really do love this story, it just has something, I can't think of what, that gives it that little bit extra. Makes it a really enjoyable read. I think it has to do with the under represented character and your writing techniques that make it such a good read.
I look forward to reading your other stories late. :)

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