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Review:October Sea Breeze says:
OSB or Kath here with that halfy requested review because I can't keep promises!

You know I don't have a lot to say, although I want to say a lot because I like long reviews! Okay didn't make sense.
So, on we go!

Hugo/Lysander. My (only?), favourite Next Gen pairing. You know how unfamiliar I am with them, maybe because it's (our time line:) IN THE FUTURE! I'm a History freak, so I tend to go back in time, not forwards. But you're tricking me into Next Gen with these two.

Lysander is just to adorable! He seems a little more like Rolf - although we have no idea how Rolf acts, I think he's a bit more sane than Luna... and so, Lys seems more a Rolf. Although you can see a bit of Luna in him as well.
Hugo is... not exactly what I expected. I always think he's more of an introvert character... and not as 'hot' as Lys thinks he is - I refuse to believe that at the end of this Chapter, Lys is already "liking" Hugo. For the rest he seems quite okay.
Ron & Harry are pretty fine, maybe Ron not really trusting Lysander - or just anyone in general - is a bit odd. I dunno, Ron maybe isn't a person that easily trusts people, but I can see him trust Lysander no matter how maybe times Lysander has come late or forgotten something. Okay, the wand forgetting was just weird!

On the wand forgetting! What wizard forget his wand? Isn't that the first thing they grab when they wake up (when not wearing glasses). It seems like a thing they carry around all time - like we with our phones or keys. Why has Lys keys? Or does he live in a muggle environment.

Overall it's pretty good. It's a fun read, Sam ^^

xOSB, feel free to re-request because I'm not able to keep promises as I said before x)

Author's Response: Hey, Kath. :)

Next-Gen is awesome. You shuld read more! Hugo/Lysander is just the icing on the cake. :P

That's just the best thing I've ever read! He is more like Rolf!
Lysander doesn't like him straight after the first chapter; he's liked him since he was fifteen (which you find out in a later chapter). That's seven years for Hugo love for Xander!
He may not be as hot as that; It's just how Xander (and I) see him. :P
Ron does trust Lysander. He's just being over-protective of his son. He doesn't want anyone looking after Hugo except him, and he can't. It's not Xander. :)

He overslept, he's tired, he forgets his wand. Everybody forgets things. I forget my phone and keys all the time! Yes, Xander lives in a Muggle environment, that's why he has keys... And a microwave. :D

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Sam.

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