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Review:LoopyLemon says:
This is brilliant!
I loved the intro. You captured me totally right from the beginning and had me laughing with that line "I couldn't take care of anything more complicated than a cat"
The fast paced style of writing fits a radio show perfectly and I love the fact that Molly hasn't lost any of her motherly attributes.
Fred seems exactly as I would imagine him. He has the sense of humour of his dad and uncle and you pull the dialouge off beautifully.
I loved the touch of the clock, showing the fun in the office and a bit of the relationships through something that is funny in itself.
All in all a beautiful piece of writing that had me laughing the whole way through. Can't wait to read the rest!!

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