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Review:siriuslyawesome says:
So I was sitting around studying for my midterms, and by studying for my midterms i mean eating cake and watching tv and on a whim decided to check the site and HOLY MOLY YOU ACTUALLY POSTED i almost dropped my cake because of you. Now it is late and I do actually need to study so the review will be brief (for me) First kudos on using the word diabolical it's a fun word i like the way it rolls of my tongue. And i loved lillys little childhood story and james's commentary, its nice to hear some one do something besides for just bash petunia no she isn't a modle sister but things are always deeper than some make it out to be. As for my favorite line in the chapter “Sounds like the two of you have taken on a battalion of trolls armed only with mischief and good intentions.”
Oh but I must say i loved going from this line which was very pretty and eloquent "Lily could feel his warm breath upon her ear, like a humid summer breeze that came before the storm. And ever so quietly, he spoke a word that crackled like thunder shaking her mind into ecstatic oblivion." to this “Bloody flaming pimples on Cronus’ hemroidic stinking arse!”
Absolutely fantastic!
I am so happy to be reading this story again and age difference psh 14 is a perfectly reasonable age for her to be kissing up on sirius (it's legal in the czech republic!) I can't wait for hopefully more julia next chapter i have missed her and sirius and this whole story a lot. And i think you are under estimating yourself yes you borrowed a few things from jk but really the character development and the writing in the hard part you have a very creative mind to come up with this. Im sure you can come up with a story without Ms Rowlings assistance in any way. POST AGAIN AND NOT IN A YEAR. My birthday is feb 29th and i expect major progress in this story by then you hear me!

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