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Review:tydemans says:
Rachel :)

I experienced most of this story through text-to-speech. It's autumn and beautiful where I live so listened to it on a long walk. I had to go back to the text to find this: "The first man in was nearly always the first taken out."

I love that part. Not sure why it stood out above the rest, but for me it did. I felt for both James and Teddy in that realization, but then I felt for the whole family, really, as they each processed their own bits in their own way. You presented very realistic family dynamics with the fic and some growth for everybody involved, I think. The characters and the emotions really shined.

Congrats on your nominations and thanks for a very lovely walk ;)

~ Ty

Author's Response: Hi Ty!

You're very brave for using text-to-speech (I tried it once and cringed so much I had to turn it off) but that sounds like such a lovely walk!

I really like that line myself. I tend to forget I write these things until someone points it out and I do remember writing that very vividly and reworking it a few times to fit it in. I felt the relationship between Teddy and James was really, really important, for Teddy especially.

Thank you so much. I'm really glad you liked it (and enjoyed your walk :P )

xx

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