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Review:tydemans says:
Kate this was a great read! You did a phenomenal job - the setting, the characters, the action - I'm glad I read it after completion because it deserved that momentum.

Confession: I don't think Maria is your baddest bad guy. Yes, she's pure evil, a shadow of all that is bad looming over everything, but in this story, Cass is your fully-fledged villain. I think you do a great job with her. I like the ambiguity at the end - did she really mean it? Without that ambiguity the wrap-up would have been too clean. I personally believe she is cutting her losses rather than truly converted. I see her emerged from suicidal to survivalist but her arc isn't complete in this story (and it doesn't need to be). There's enough humanity somewhere deep in there to hope for a change, but she's done too much for it to be an easy reverse.

The battle is over (not won) but the conflict continues. I'm glad you are doing a companion piece. I won't be so late with that one.

Take care!
~ Ty

Author's Response: Ty, thank you so much darling. i am really pleased you enjoyed it!!! *hugs*

oh no. maria is not the baddest bad guy. she is evil but she is more...misguided in her evilness. cass is evil - she is the villain. i am really stoked you liked her. i don't know where she came from - she worries me a little, lol. i agree with you - she has cut her losses, like joe basically suggested she do. i don't see her as converted in any way - just doing what she needs to do to survive. i am really happy you see that too!!

thank you darling!!! This review has made my day!

Kate xx


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