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Review:LittleWelshGirl99 says:
Wow, I think that is one of the most interesting stories that I have ever read!


I am old, yet I am new. I tell nothing but the truth, yet everything is a lie. I am perfect, yet full of so many faults. I am everything they wish me to be, just nothing like what they desire. I’ve seen life. I’ve seen death. I’ve seen love. I’ve seen hate. I’ve seen jealousy. I’ve seen desire. I’ve seen time.


I love this description of the mirror; it's perfect! It's almost haunt g and beautiful. It really inspired me to read on. The first little point I'd like to make is about why the mirror specifically remembered Dominique? Wouldnt it have remembered Harry more or someone a little more exciting with a very Interesting reflection shown? I do think you wrote it in a very original and lovely way though. Really good!
-LWG

Author's Response: Thankyou so much!
As for your query about why Dominique, in my mind the mirror only projects the person's deepest desire, not the person they actually are. So when the mirror saw Harry's desires, it was just another person who desired a lost relative. Nothing important (to it). However with Dominique she wasn't blinded by a major fault (like fearing death) or wanting to be rich etc. She was happy as she was, she didn't want to change, she wanted the world to. Becuase of that, the mirror thought her as special.

Thankyou for the review and giving me the chance to explain myself!

Keira :)

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