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Review:leannemariesnape says:
Oh, Hi there! I bet you're shocked to see a review from me! :P

This was a great start. Your description was excellent, and I could really imagine myself in the scene, among the chaos. I really liked Rowena's thoughts on the things happening around her, and also the characterisation you've already given her.

The only thing I can think of to criticise is that it could possibly benefit from being longer. Looking forwards to more chapters. ^_^

Leanne.

Author's Response: I know it needs to be longer, but having nearly finished the next chapter, this seems like an introduction... haha :L

Thanks so much for the review, it is really helpful to hear what you think about the story... plus it seems to boost my ego a bit! :L


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