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Review:dobbyismyhero22 says:
Claps for Rebecca for having another fantastic chapter.

I like Scorpius already, but I'm surprised that he's captain. Not that that's a bad thing...just surprising. Is Al in this story at all or did I just miss him? I feel like there's a lot of awkward chemistry between James and Nata and I like that. In a way, it's kind of sweet, but not really...I don't even know what I'm saying right now, but yeah.

ANYWAYS, great chapter. :D

Author's Response: Aw thank you :)

I'm glad you like Scorpius! I made him captain, because I knew people wouldn't expect it. I'm trying to make all of the characters different from what anyone would expect. So I thought Scorpius being Gryffindor captain would be a surprise :)

Al will come into the story eventually, he was not mentioned in this chapter so don't worry you didn't miss him! I have my own separate plan for him!

And yes, the awkward chemistry is fun for me to write! And don't worry about knowing what you're saying, I don't know what I'm saying have the time either, so it don't matter.

Thank you for reviewing! I'm so happy you liked the chapter :DDD

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