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Review:tangledconstellations says:

I am so, so, SO sorry this has taken me forever to get round to properly reviewing etc. BUT OMG. I LOVE YOU. :D this is so beautiful ! I loved your sneaky mention of 'tangled constellations' - it made me smile! But this is perfect. So amazing! I can't think coherently, I just love you/this/it/xforever!

Thank you 100 trillion times for this, you wrote Percy wonderfully. His story is one I adore, and thank you so much for writing this because I feel as though its the story he needed and has never had told, genuinely. I just love this so, so much. I can't even explain it. This needs to exist as something more than ff. This IS what he must have felt. He's brave and he's strong and he's sorry but so, so importantly and indescribably full of flaws too. I love how tiny I felt when reading this, how tiny yet huge Percy was too, just one upon millions, like you said, in the fiery cosmos. The atmosphere was beautiful. I've said beautiful 100 times! And the sorriness, and the thinking, and the way everything is hanging in the balance and he's doused in comforts but he feels like he shouldn't be but he should because he's AMAZING and loved and you're amazing and loved and OH!

Sorry. Coherence. Hem, hem.

You're the best.

In the universe. Amongst those tangled constellations (he he!) YOU are the brightest star of all because you put the time and effort into this and I appreciate it so much. SO MUCH. OK? :'D I am so flattered. Beyond flattered. This is just so ME. & you are just so superbly and brilliantly talented and it makes me want to squish you because you are lovely. And everything, EVERYTHING about this was so amazing.

THANK YOU SO MUCH. EEK. :'} thank you!! I adore this. And you! Just for writing it for me. You're so lovely!

- (a very emotional & excited) Laura xx

Author's Response: AHEM-- -flourishes-

WELL HELLO THERE!! I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to respond to these--I just started school three weeks ago and, well, I think we all know how that is.

First can I just tell you how SCARY percy is from a writer's perspective? I read your stuff to see if I could try to make him how you would like and I just got sooo scared because he's a walking contradiction! A cowardly, ambitious weasley...Y U NO SLYTHERIN, PERCE.

But at the same time, I could really sympathise with him somehow. Not empathise obviously but somehow I could see how much it would hurt him to come back to his family only to lose one of them so quickly--it would be like a nightmare! That thought was quickly the inspiration for the style of this piece--I went after sort of a lulling tone and.yeah. In short, nothing like the brilliance you achieve, but still my take on percy nonetheless :)

And I'm so glad that you appreciated this portrayal! It all sort of came to me I think subconsciously because looking at your review I can't exactly figure out how to respond except to thank you for your excitement and praise :D

AND YOU'RE SO WELCOME!!! Hehehe the last couple paragraphs make me giggle when I read this--it takes a lot to get me outside of my dry action or bad fluff so I really should be thanking /you./


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