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Review:Jade Sterling says:
Hello, my dear!

This is a really lovely story! Your Teddy is so sweet and loving without making me want to puke all over myself. I'm really glad that Victoire isn't just some uber-beautiful vela that has no real job and just floats around being hot. I can almost not stand to read stories that have velas in them because of the stereotypes. I really love that she has red hair, as well! I wasn't expecting that and I had to read over that line twice, but, she is a Weasley! So I shouldn't be that surprised!
The descriptions of the flowers was so lovely, and made me want some wizarding foxgloves! It was very amusing to me that Teddy found some charms unnecessary, I think they would be extremely useful!
The only thing about this story that I would alter in any way would be to make Victoires reaction to being proposed to would be bigger, if they've really been together for that long I just see her freaking out a little bit more, no matter how grounded she is!

This was absolutely lovely, my dear! You are a fantastic writer.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! (Both for reading and for reviewing!)

And yes, my only next-gen kids without red hair are Fred and Roxanne (obviously), James, Dominique, and maybe Lucy. Gotta keep the Weasley red hair legacy intact! :P

I'm definitely going to extend her reaction a bit more. :)

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