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Review:Woodrow Rynne says:
Hey, I've joined this challenge too, and I must say you did a very good job! :)

My favourite part was the characterisation; I loved that Ron and Luna actually acted like young kids. Also, the characters of Fred and George were so spot on; I couldn't stop grinning :P

One thing though- Ron and Luna didn't meet until the fifth year, right? I mean that's what JK implied; but it's very possible that Ron forgot about it- so very like him.

A few typos I spotted- "You donít make is sound as good as Fred..." It should be "make *it*", right?

Also, somewhere in the middle- you mistyped Ron as Ton. Very minor mistakes; I'm sure you'll spot them at once. :)

I must say it was a very cute one-shot. I loved the last sentence. It was an interesting plot idea. Overall, I really enjoyed this well written piece :)

Author's Response: Dang typo's! Thank you for catching them! (its not my area of expertise) :)
I kinda figured that he might have met her as a child since they were sort of neighbors; and that when they met in fifth its really Harry meeting her. (but idk lol, I need to re-read them :D)
Anywho thank you so much! I am really glad you liked it!! I do my best to keep the characters in... well, character. ;)

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