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Review:Astra says:
This was beautiful. I was easily engrossed in the story.

Usually, most Lily-James stories really turn me away, as I don't really like the whole 'James-annoyed-the-living-shit-out-of-me-for-the-longest-time' thing. But I think that this truly does show the part of the relationship that most people do not see. They think something suddenly changed, but as you said, their relationship came up in the midst of a war where nothing is easy.

I'm just in love with this. This is the first 10/10 rating I've given in a long time, but this left me with a certain feeling that I can't really identify, but I'm pleased.

Nice job!

Author's Response: Getting readers engrossed is one of the things I love to hear about - it's wonderful to have achieved the right amount of depth and atmosphere to draw in the reader to such an extent. ^_^

Yes! I'm glad that you liked that aspect of this story. Typical Lily/James stories get so run-of-the-mill in their portrayal of the two characters - very superficial in many ways, and it's painful to see when there's potential for so much more. People don't change that fast, and it never made sense how especially Lily could align herself with James in the space of a single school year, so I wanted to draw it out a little more, let it be more natural, less fairy-tale romance.

Thank you very much for reading, loving, and reviewing this story! It means a lot that you've enjoyed it to such an extent! ^_^

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