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Review:SearchingForLuna says:
I don't usually read a ton of AU's, but I really liked this one! Harry was very well done and his characterization very true to the books. I especially liked the dialogue, it sounded a lot like J.K.'s. :) It was exciting to see inside Harry's head.

I didn't see any grammatical errors and the story as a whole flowed marvelously. You have a wonderful writing style.

FAVORITE QUOTE TIME!!

"It really would have been something to have escaped the Dursleys in a flying car.."

That made me laugh. It was such a wry little insertion of canon, and still flowed very well with the story.

10/10! :)

Author's Response: This was originally written for a challenge, but I wanted to make it as canon as possible while fitting the requirements (I had to take a given "what if" scenario and rewrite a scene from the books).

It means so much to me that you thought the dialogue sounded like J.K.'s -- that is an extremely flattering compliment, and I really thank you for it.

Everyone does seem to like that quote! :D I wanted to sort of pay tribute to the master, as it were. Thank you so much for leaving such a wonderfully sweet review!


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