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Review:Salem says:
Agnes here with your review!

Sooo soo so sorry about the wait! I recently got a new computer and the word document with your review got lost in the file transfer so here I am writing up a new one for you.

I knew from the moment I read the title and summary that this piece was going to be serious and involve some type of abuse--poor Merope. One of the more pitiable characters in the entire series, I think. She didn't deserve what life threw her way :c

I think this was a wonderful retelling and elaboration of the events in Merope's miserable life. The characterization was fine, the dialogue was fine, and the flow was a bit choppy since it was broken up into particular events but I think that worked rather well with the story overall.

Poor girl suffered so much through her life, and I think you captured her tragedy very well. Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. The summary was particularly hard for me so I'm glad you liked that. And yes, Merope was going to suffer abuse -- that, I think, was inevitable.

Yup, the flow was choppy because of the different definitions of "bruise" so that's why. Thanks again for the review!

~Soraya~

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