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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
That was adorable! And I loved the end. Krum, I think, was always affected by jealousy, so that last line was just perfect. It closed off the one shot so nicely.

Now that I read this, I'm actually surprised to not have stumbled across Viktor/Fleur before. The way you wrote them actually made it a really sweet ship! I thought it was really believable, and I like how they just did little things. Your Viktor was characterized perfectly, and good job with the accents!

The one thing I would have liked to see was a mention of Bill, somewhere. They didn't necessarily have to get married, but they were together for a few years, and I would have loved to see a small mention of that.

Really though, great story! :D
-Naida

Author's Response: I was really worried about the end, if it was too much or too little (I'm really bad at this kinda thing) so it's good to know you liked it!
I've never seen them before either, but the potential is interesting. Writing Viktor killed me, though - it was unbelievably hard - and the accents were so frustrating. I can't count the number of times I typed 'we' and then had to change it...
I did think about mentioning him, at one point, instead of Roger Davies, but thought that perhaps it might not be the best move in this one-shot, given the title.

Thanks for the review and I'm so glad you like it!
Aph xx

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