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Review:Giola says:
Hey AD! I'm here, finally, with your review, sorry it's taken so long!

Ok, this is a very entertaining story. I personally am NOT a Dramione fan, at all, but this was actually rather enjoyable. The banter between the two of them was very fun and light-hearted, with just the right amount of undertones. You have a good mix of description in here, enough so that I can picture the scene in my mind, but not too much, so it's still engaging to read.

You have a really good grasp on writing a light-hearted piece here, I'd like to see more of that style from you, honestly. You do it very well. There are a few minor grammar errors, but nothing big. You do miss out a few commas, and I suggest putting some in so that your sentences flow more naturally. Also there are a few spacing issues, which I assume are because you used the advanced editor when submitting this - no big deal, but if you use the simple editor you wouldn't have multiple spaces between paragraphs when they aren't really necessary.

Overall, well done :D.

-Giola

Author's Response: Hey Giola!

I can always count on your for giving sweet yet honest reviews, thank you :)

I am glad you found it enjoyable despite of not being a DraMione fan, and even gladder that you actually gave this a chance :) Good to know that I can write light-hearted stuff well too - now that is something unexpected yet flattering!
Um yeah, the spacing issues always bug me, but hey thanks for the advice - I'll use the simple editor next time - and go through the fic once I've time and do the edits!

Thanks a lot for your heart-warming review! I am glad you liked this!

Cheers!
AD


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