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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Okay, okay...where to start?

First, I'd like you to congratulate yourself for coming up with such a wonderful story. I think this story deserves more than 10/10 for bringing almost all the emotions in and the reader 9or maybe just me) can actually feel it.

Second, the description, was just enough for me to get hooked just by reading it. It wasn't one of those typical ones, somehow they had more than word in them.

Third, the ending was simple, but not too simple it held me in place infront of my laptop blown away by the ending.

This story was one of a kind and I will never ever forget how good you wrote this, no matter how many people otherwise.

xx keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Wow, it's weird because I was thinking of requesting a review from you for this story, only to discover that you already had - always a bonus. :D

I'm glad to hear that the description and the ending worked out - description is very important, especially in a story like this, where it almost takes precedence over the plot and characters; it's a very moody story. And the ending was guessed at entirely - it was a hard story to end because I'd originally wanted something very romantic, but it felt forced when I tried it; it just didn't fit. Simplicity was thus the way to go, and knowing that it was for the best is a great thing. Thank you!

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