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Review:Snapdragons says:
Hi Jordan! ♥ I'm here from the QTR birthday extravaganza and I have to say how excited I am to read your works. I can't believe I never have before! Even reading just this first one (though I plan to get to many more soon!) made me realize how much I've been missing out on - I really, really loved this!

This is beautiful! Why aren't there lots and lots of reviews on this? It needs them! I enjoyed every piece of it.

I loved the style of this. Your use of metaphors and imagery was so wonderful. I loved the idea of the hurricane in the sea and "the roars of the school monsters in the stands are ever so overwhelming". I personally really enjoy the whole short segments style of writing, and I think you pulled it off very nicely here.

The other thing I really enjoyed is how you never gave the "magic boy" a name - I thought that was a good idea! I'm left with my suspicions (a Potter boy would be my first guess), but really, it could be any boy in really any time. I love that!

He is Isabella's magic boy, but he is everybody's magic boy. and
A few days later, she will see him being another girl's magic boy. were just some lines that really stuck out to me. The idea of him being special to everyone in some way, and how he moves on quickly... loved it!

Section six was definitely my favorite - all of it! I liked how it brought the idea of a cycle into play, connecting back to your title. And that last line - oh, it was perfect!" After all that, he leaves her hanging."

It was certainly not god-awful, no worries! In fact, I really really enjoyed it and I'm so glad that I've been given the opportunity to read your stories. I'm a lucky duck! :) wonderful job!

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