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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
Probably not the first story you would want me to review but after I realized how many stories of yours I had already reviewed, I found this one hidden at the bottom and the summary sucked me in. I've loved everything I've read by you and this is no exception. It's short, but you convey SO MUCH through your choice of words and the character that you have chosen.

There's something powerful and magical about Molly Weasley. She's such a strong woman, a mother and a protector. I think you did a wonderful job with her here, describing not only her sadness at the loss of their children (because they really were only children fighting in a war against adults and people hardened by a life of Dark Magic) but the strength she has to persevere, even when she's lost one child already. The fact that she draws from Harry's strength is a nice addition too - it proves that she's still human and she needs to rely on someone else once in a while to give her that extra push.

The imagery and descriptions in this are fantastic - the rage that runs through her vein and all I can imagine is that tiny spark and an inferno that pulses and shreds its way into the curses that she speaks and the movement of her wand. I don't know, it's just really, really nicely written. Your description of Bellatrix! How her hair is like Medusa's snakes - I loved that, especially because of the snake idea and her loyalty to Voldemort.

I just really loved this entire story. You did such a fantastic job in so few words. Adding this to my favorites list!

Author's Response: Aw geez, you've read practically all my stories now! I guess that means I better get writing!!

I LOVE Molly Weasley and your own take on her is exactly what I think of when I think of her. She's a bit underrated by others but one has to realize that she shaped the seven Weasley children AND Harry and Hermione.

I spent a lot of time thinking over these words and I'm very happy that you thought so highly of it!

xChar


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