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Review:Remus says:
Hey! Its Perelandra from the forums with your review! FINALLY! haha I'm sorry it has taken a while.

Anyway, this was fantastic. I absolutely loved the imagery you gave us. It wasn't overly detailed so it worked wonderfully. You didn't have much dialogue but that worked out just fine. I did not see any grammar mistakes...or anything!

I absolutely loved how Harry descended into madness bit by bit...however, I would've loved to see how Ron, Hermione and Ginny "betrayed" Harry. Or some explanation as to what happened. You know...I've always wondered what would've happened if Harry got all Horcruxes but the one in him before killing Voldemort. Would that mean that he, in the end, would go mad for having the only remaining piece of Voldemort inside him? Or perhaps, in your story, it was just the stress...he didn't have a regular childhood...battling evil and all.

Honestly, the way I was reading this I was reminded of the movie Aronofsky's Black Swan or Lars von Trier's Melancholia where you KNOW this is not going to end well...and yet it was for the best.

Anyway! This was a fantastic read! Thanks!!

10/10

--Perelandra

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! No worries about the length - a review at all, no matter when it's left, is more than good enough for me. :)

Ron, Hermione, and Ginny never betrayed Harry at all. He just tricked his mind into thinking they had, and it took it from there. He's convinced they're neo-Death Eaters, and all they want to do is have dinner with him, all the normal things good friends do. It's his insanity that twists that around.

I love exploring minds - they're so tricky and twisty and fascinating. :3 Thank you again for taking the time to leave a review, I appreciate it very much!


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