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Review:Sam says:
I liked this a lot. It's an interesting angle. We all know Dumbledore developed a wealth of knowledge over his life and was an unbelievably odd character; as geniuses often are. So the accumulation of that knowledge is an interesting story to tell. Maybe you could do a series of novellas leading to the climax being his duel with Grindlewald?! I'd read that. I'm a big fan brother well done. Also thanks for reminding me about the Phoenix wand! It'd be good to see this edited again as there are a couple of bits that don't flow properly as a result of it not being done yet. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks for checking out this little story and taking the time to comment. It's really just a short scene I wrote, not knowing if anything further would ever come of it. I've dabbled with two more short chapters since then, so maybe it will develop a bit further. Gee, I don't know if I'll ever feel ambitious enough to try writing the complete story of Albus' young life, but thanks for trying to plant a seed of inspiration! I'm just concentrating on trying to write my Harry story right now, most of which is still unwritten, so I've got a real challenge ahead of me just trying to accomplish that. Yeah, I know what you mean about some of the phrases not flowing as smoothly as they could in this piece. Whenever I put a piece of writing aside for a while and then come back to it, I always notice things I'd like to rephrase. You mentioned being a writer, so I'm sure you know how that goes. I'll get around to doing another edit eventually. In the meantime, thanks for reading, thanks for leaving such nice comments and words of encouragement on both stories I've got posted, and thanks for your helpful suggestions.

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