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Review:charlottetrips says:
I love Severus Snape and I love that you are writing a(nother) story about him. I just realized that the other story I reviewed for the Review Battle was a Severus Snape story! I see that we have something in common (besides the 'Claw).

"Instead she simply took his heart, and disappeared with it." - this summed up everything about Snape and Lily to me.

Everything flowed so beautifully and seamlessly. Snape's eternal regret over Lily is woven so deftly throughout each paragraph and description. The fact that he is preparing himself to meet her son while still missing her as dearly as he did all those years ago is so bittersweet and something that really draws me to his character.

Your writing is so lovely to read because the descriptions aren't tawdry and meant to look good; the words you use are the words needed to convey the emotion and feeling and I like that. It's very professional and just draws me right in without having to pay attention to how awkward something was worded.

I think I'll be continuing this story when I have a bit more time!

xChar

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely review, Char! I can't quite formulate a response, you've left me speechless. ♥ I love writing Snape, it's a sort of release for me. And when people have nice things to say about what I've written, it just really means so much to me.

I'm glad you enjoyed it!


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