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Review:dobbys_socks says:
Oh wow, that was amazing. I've never read anything like it.

Fred. Albus. Mum. Dad. So much tragedy in the family, yet no discussions about these losses. I really felt for the Weasleys through your writing and I think you portayed George perfectly; "George never realized exactly how much of himself was actually Fred until Fred was gone, leaving a cold, gaping hole in his wake." That is exactly how George must have felt and I congratulate you on capturing that image. Well done.

I was a little confused about Roxanne and Dominique; I didn't really understand who they were. Having Angelina as George's wife was a great idea, though I thought it was Fred who liked her, but never mind. my favourite line is definitely "The world still ticks, with or without you, and either you can stay at Mortal Peril or you can move with the time, and somehow make it around the face of the clock." I love how you interpreted Molly's clock into the story and I thought that that was really clever.

All in all, I loved your story through and through; I like the way you wrote the characters (especially Harry not telling nyone what he had taken but you probably could have built on that), incorporated little things like Arthur's plugs and toaster collection and how George's voice shone through it all making the story clearer and more vibrant.

Amazing, beautiful story. 10/10.

dobbys_socks

Author's Response: Hello, there! Thank you so much for stopping by and reading/reviewing this story. And the Pattern Repeats is probably my favorite one-shot I've written.

That said, I thought to perhaps clarify a few things! It's not mentioned in the Deathly Hallows epilogue, but Rowling created a family tree and George, in fact, marries Angelina. I thought it odd at first as well, since she went to the ball with Fred, but since Angelina and Fred never gave any evidence for being anything more than just friends, I've grown to really like it. Their children are named Roxanne and Fred II. :) Dominique, Victoire, and Louis are Bill and Fleur's children. I didn't invent any of these characters, Rowling did. :P

My bit about the world ticking with or without you, and the reference to Molly's clock, was my favorite bit of the story, so I am VERY pleased that you liked that.

:)

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