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Review:onestop_hpfan18 says:
Aw, the cuteness that is Albus/Alice is so sweet. I love them together. Really. I do hope you continue writing this story, it's so cute and fun, and you've characterised Alice so well. She's a nerdy outcast, but completely relate-able to all readers. The only critique I have for you though is quotations within quotations; you would use the single quotations within a speaking quotation. Like this "Don't tell me you're going to tell me 'It's not you, it's me?' lines." Like that. Double quotations on the outside and single on the inside within. It just looks more proper and neat, as well as being more grammatically accurate. Other than that, though, great job. I really am enjoying this story and hope your inspiration for it returns. (: 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks for the tips on the quotations - I've always had trouble figuring out what to do with those! Aww, I love all you shippers! Glad to know that you like Alice's character. I've actually been considering redefining her a little bit.

Unfortunately, I will probably not resume writing this story anytime soon. I've sort of lost my inspiration for it and am focusing on my other story right now (Clinging to the Edge), but reading reviews like yours always keeps my strings attached to this story, or else I would probably delete it off the archive altogether. Thank you so much for reviewing this story and I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply to you on them!


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