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Review:StEpH_M says:
I must admit it's weird reading a one-shot where Rose and Scorpius don't get together in the end. Their relationship is like so many you would see in a High school, between people of that age. Someone who is infatuated, and the other that doesn't feel the same. It's good that there are stories on her, that don't always have a lovey-dovey, predictable ending between the too. It's romantic, yet it doesn't hold all the love struck cliches that are so common. I also like that Rose found someone else in the end, that she wasn't pining over Scorpius and that they were able to stay friends in the end.
I small thing to fix, "Scorpius began going to her when he was in one of moods, as she liked to call it." For the one of moods part, is it meant to have 'his' in it?

Also I really don't know what you meant by this sentence but I thought I would point it out, just in case it was wrong, "That what he told her was meant only for her." And two more thing, you added an extra 'how' into this sentence, "Scorpius knew how exactly how to make Rose feel better"and "They only time Rose" it should be the.

Your writing as always is extremely detailed and flows amazingly. The way you gave small glimpses of the years that Rose spent with Scorpius gave the story just that little extra touch, it really made me able to understand the way both of them felt and to be able to sympathies with both of them. It was an amazing story, just like all of the ones I have read so far.
Also sorry there was only one review from me tonight, I will be giving you a lot more hopefully in the next two days.

Author's Response: I think it's a kind of relationship that isn't explored enough :) Some of the most important relationships don't need to be family or friends or lovers or any other label. Simply people who come and go.

Oh typos. Alas.

Thank you for another review! ^__^

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