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Review:Snapdragons says:
This is incredible. Really. It was crazy and chaotic and sort of unnerving and all around wonderful!

I felt as though having it out of order really helped illustrate Harry's insanity here and made it feel sort of jarring - in a good way, though, because I felt as though it was on purpose. Does that make sense? (it's late at night, so excuse me!) Anyways, I really enjoyed the style it was written in is what I'm trying to get across.

I liked how you showed Harry in this, too, because it's not the typical way that he's characterized. Yet it made sense to have Harry be insane - it actually feels more logical for the war to have left some sort of lasting impact on him.

The other characters felt very canon as well, which is always nice. Ron was particularly well done!

It could be a bit confusing at times, but I felt as though that added to the overall feel of the piece. I could really feel his paranoia and all of his emotions :)

You have a way with words that's really remarkable. You painted such a vivid mental picture in my mind that it was really beautiful. I have to say that this line will probably stick with me for a while: "Time stood still just before the pieces, jagged and beautiful and dangerous, exploded everywhere, and for that brief oasis of time he saw himself. It had only ever been himself." Completely gorgeous.

The ending was perfect. Sorry that this review isn't actually very helpful... I was blown away by this piece and really, really enjoyed it. Great work and I'm so glad I found it! :)

Author's Response: EEEK. How do I respond to this. I am baffled.

I am so glad you found it jarring and confusing. :D Weird? Yeah, I know. This story was heavily influenced by the writing styles of Faulkner and McCarthy, Faulkner's "The Sound and the Fury" especially. The jarring confusion was planned thoroughly. :P

Thank you SO much. I am speechless with gratitude. ♥

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