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Review:kaileena_sands says:
OH. MY. GOD. This story was absolutely amazing! I am like super flattered that my CI (for once) is on top of such a great story!

So I have to tell you. I rarely get surprised when I read something. I think I've almost forgotten the feeling. BUT THIS? I totally did not expect this plot twist even though you hinted it so well! So really clever! I love it!

And everything is written so well. I love the colour symbolism throught the story and how despite Teddy's great attention to detail he was so blinded by his love for Victoire that he never noticed her materialistic ways.

So, all in all, amazing story! I think that the greatest aspect of it might be the great connection you made between the reader and Teddy. You've built up the story in a standard way and the reader, just as Teddy eventually, expects Victoire to marry him in the end. And when he realizes her ways, he gets as much of an emotional slap as the reader. Brilliant! I think I a fav-ing this.

Author's Response: I'm flattered to have your CI at the top of my chapter! And I get an amazing review on top of that :D

I am SO SO glad I was able to surprise you! I completely agree that stories are getting so predictable these days, and I always strive to be original somehow. So yay, I surprised Maya! Thank you for the comment on colors too. I was hoping people would pick up on that! Eep, your review has made my week. Thank you so much for liking this! It means the world that you read and reviewed!
-Naida

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