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Review:StEpH_M says:
So I think this was my favourite out of all the ones I have read so far. I love how you used Little Red Riding hood as your theme. It was really sweet and gave the one-shot that extra little something to make it alluring.

You used the Next Generation characters really well. Using their attributes as the key to their roles in the folklore. I hope I have this right, Victorie is like the Grandma? Teddy is obviously the wolf and I am guessing Dom is little red. The way you wrote the whole story from a very different way, it was absolutely brilliant. I must admit I did get confused a bit at the start with the candy and the parts where Victoire was luring Teddy but after that I was able to understand it easily and followed along with the story without a problem. It was also interesting how you ended it with the same fate coming to pass with Dom as with Victoire, just like in the folklore.

The only thing that I was left to wonder about was who is the woodcutter, is there a woodcutter?

Author's Response: Fairy tales and folklore have always been my favorite kinds of stories :) It's not an exact translation of Little Red into the HP world, so there isn't really a grandma or woodcutter. But there is a wolf and a girl who strays off the path, and that is what I wanted to use.

The beginning part, it was Dominique who was luring Teddy, and I was using the candy to sort of describe her. She's young, and that's how I wanted to show it :)


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