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Review:StEpH_M says:
As usually your writing is lovely, it flows beautifully and the wording really makes the story that little bit more special.

So I love how you made Scorpius and Victoire lovers, it was really sweet, that Scorpius cared for her well-being even though he was being slightly selfish with trying to steal her away as well. I must admit that I had torn feels about whether she should have left with Scorpius or not or stayed with Teddy. Also, Teddy's condition? That was really something that intrigued me, I am still wondering what it is. Victoire is defiantly a Weasley in this one-shot, in a lot of the one-shots I read Victoire is either swooning over Teddy or is shallow. I liked that you should her to be kind at heart and determined to stay with Teddy even though she has fallen out of love with him.
A few small things you could fix, "Victoire reached the edge of the road at the same his car stopped." You forgot to add 'time that'.
Also
"The memories of spring moved farther and closer all at once." It would be better if you made it 'farther away'.

Overall, it was once again lovely to read, you are defiantly one of a kind in your writing and I am glad of that cause it means all your stories are special.

Author's Response: That's probably the favorite part of this oneshot - that it isn't clear who she should be with, and whether or not she made the right decision.

I hardly write characters who are truly self-sacrificing, actually, so Victoire is something I do admire greatly.

Oh noes, more typos galore! D;

Aww, thank you so so much :3

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