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Review:Aether says:
Wonderful first chapter! I love Molly's character. When I saw that she was six feet tall, I instantly fell in love. I know I'm a short person, so technically I can't really relate to Molly's height. However, I knew a girl who is six feet tall, and I know just how TALL that is for a girl. I'm really impressed that you've made her a seeker, too. I think that's another interesting twist. What made her prefer being a seeker to a chaser or keeper? I guess there's more freedom in that position. I got the impression from the opening paragraphs of this chapter that Molly is very poetic.

I love how you characterize Percy, too. It's very in character and the relationship between Percy and Molly leaves a lot of room for development.

I think the pace of the story is fine at this point. Even though all that happened in this chapter was Molly getting ready for the ministry event, the reader had a chance to get to know the characters a little better. I also think that the fact that she's six feet tall and a seeker should be enough to keep a reader like me interested.

Overall, excellent first chapter. I really don't have anything to complain about! I thought it was beautifully written! 10/10

Aether

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks so much for reviewing :)

I'm so glad you like Molly and Percy. Their dynamic is so fun and interesting for me to write. And I'm glad you're finding it interesting so far! Thanks so much for your time!

--Maggie

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