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Review:leannemariesnape says:
This is a very sweet story, and I love the ending. It's just so fluffy!

I think that there were also a couple of humourous scenes, for example, the thing about Manchester City, which made me laugh. I also thought your characterisation of Teddy was adorble, and I loved how much Vic was anticipating the date. I was so glad it worked out well! The kisses at the end were just... dghjfd amazing. The description is well done, and the dialogue was also very natural.

As for crit, I thought that both of them were a little forward with one another, which I think would be unlikely, considering how they weren't sure about how the other person felt, in the beginning. But, I think that is totally down to personal taste, and I don't think it took away from my enjoyment of the story as a whole.

Well done for such a lovely piece! ^_^

Leanne

P.S Sorry about how short this review is. :/

Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad you liked it! I can see what you mean about them being a bit forward, though. :)

No worries about the short review! I know, I hate it when I don't have much to critique so my reviews are very short. Hopefully it's a good thing, though. :P

Thank you so much for the review. I cannot say how much I appreciate it! :)

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