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Review:harry_vampire says:
Hey-a!I'm here with your requested review!

You have unique way of explaining things, Still you do it wondefully!Every scene flowed wonderfully!In the begining I seriously didn't understand where exactly the story is leading to but slowly every scene was leading in more mystery!Ha ha! Every moment was captivating...I loved the scene of the potraits of Founders!Well, that was different!
You can make a readers hook to your story.
The two chapters I felt were bit altogether different.You have introduced so many layers that can surely make a reader confusing:P

Fred Screams?Headmaster Riddle? An awesome cliffhanger.

Thanks for asking me to review!I simply loved it!When you have next chapter ready,feel free to come request! :)



Author's Response: Hello!!! I am glad you took the time to stop by.

Unique O.o Oh really ^_^ i' gadl I can do something right ^_^ I am glad it all pieced itself together, that is how I generally look at a book, is if it can fit together like a jigsaw puzzle. I love Mystery don;t you ? O.o lol. x

Was it really that different :/ Now I am scared lol. I don't want it too be too different that I scare people off, but I don't want people to not be intrigued either O.o hmmm, x

Well, I must say, I am not sorry that I can hook readers ^_^ that is a good thing, right :D x

I know :/ I am trying to improve on my confusing bits, I know someone else said that introducting so many layes of confusion can be good but bad at the same time, so I kinda am going bak through looking for things I can fix ^_^

Poor Headmaster riddle, he dies. Whoops ^_^
Anyway, thank you for a lovely review !! It made my day ^_^ xx

~Karni. xx

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