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Review:leannemariesnape says:
Hello! Here with your review! :)

I really liked this. Remus/Sirius is a pairing that I've always been interested in, but never got round to reading. This one was very sweet.

It was interesting to read about Sirius's thoughts that Remus was the traitor, and it added a really interesting dimension to the story and the chemistry between the two. Your descriptions are to die for. Honestly, the opening paragraph was just amazing. I could picture it all in my mind vividly.

When it gets to the day of James and Lily being killed, I thought that it was a really good description of everything that happened, and it helped me to visualise some of the events more clearly in my mind.

Having people know he was innocent was also a really interesting twist on this point of view. Maybe things would have been better like this, after all, what with Peter being caught. Especially for Harry...

Also, the image near the end of Sirius with baby Harry on his chest, and Remus to the side of him was really adorable.

I noticed that in some places, some of the words were joined together, but it didn't really take away from the story.

I really enjoyed this! :)

Leanne

Author's Response: Hi there!

Remus/Sirius is the best ship ever! ;) You need to read more of it. It's definitely a bittersweet, angsty pairing.

I feel like I've briefly touched on the subject of betrayal in my other fics so it was interesting to try to make that a key point of this fic. I think the betrayal just reiterates the fact how much they care for one another - that their need for each other outweighed any of the bad that was going on in the war.

Descriptions are one of my strengths so I'm happy that it worked well for you. That's my goal!

I really wanted a happy ending for my pairing so I thought this was the best way to approach that. I wish it was canon...that Harry got to live with people who loved him and he knew about magic and his parents and how loved he was.

The joining of the words was intentional. I'm not quite sure how to describe their purpose though. It's something I do often enough in my fics though.

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

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