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Review:TenthWeasley says:
It really surprised me how much I enjoyed this story! This is one of the most realistic teenage Bellatrixes I've seen written here - you've managed to retain some of her canon traits while still making her your own, and that's extremely admirable. :) She's more believable as a character that way. And both Rodolphus and Bellatrix were a good mix of what one might assume to be typical Slytherin characteristics, and it's refreshing to see you didn't just plop them into a House without cause. :D

Your quote integration was, I thought, rather brilliant. It fit well in your scene - the whole atmosphere seemed to meld right into it, and writing in modern language while using a Shakespeare quote isn't such an easy thing to do.

Keep it up - this story was very good! You write extremely well and I predict you'll go far. :)

Author's Response: I absolutely adore Bellatrix so I'm glad you thought she was realistic! Honestly, I didn't give much thought to characteristics, they kinda wrote themselves, but it was so much fun to do.
As I got further and further through the piece I kept wondering if I would ever manage to fit it in, lol, so it's good that it seems to have worked. I guess I was lucky my quite didn't include 'doth' or 'thy' ;)

Thanks for the lovely review!
Aph xx


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