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Review:kaileena_sands says:
Oh gosh, this story was so so beautiful! I must admit, I've seen your story Ranny around the recently updated stories and I've always wanted to read it (your beautiful language in the description drew me) but I just don't have time now to read anything non one-shot-y. :( So I was super excited to go to your author's page and see that you have this amazing little gem somewhere on top of it!

I don't like it too much when stories have this great description that the story just doesn't live up to. But yours... it not only lives up to, it exceeds it by a factor of bazzillion (not a word xD). You have such a beautiful way with words! You've got those amazing descriptions and comparisons and your narrative flows so softly and gently! I'd really like to praise you a bit more on it, but unfortunately, unlike you, I am not that good with words, so I'll just leave you with this - you are a great writer.

And apart from that, you've constructed such a wonderful OC! I know it's hard to present a character in just one chapter but you've done a wonderful job! We get a good grasp of her internal world and turmoils and she sticks with you. I like her!

Anyway, I could to ramble on forever. Lovely story! Keep writing great things, I'll be sure to return to read your longer works when I have the time. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have been so busy lately and I logged on and saw this absolutely lovely review and honestly, I'm smiling so much that I can't put it in to words.
I'm glad that the description of Ranny has drawn you in, and it's okay that you haven't read it - time is something that seems to escape everyone at this time of the year :)
I don't write many one-shots but whe I do, they're usually over-loaded with description and heavily dramatic ;) but I'm glad that you enjoyed this.
You're very sweet, and I'm very flattered, so thank you :)
If you do decide to come back and read more of my work, I would be very grateful, and I hope that you enjoy anything that you do read! Thank you again, and I hope that it lives up to your expectations! :)

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