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Review:The Empress says:
Cryptic Seb ♥
Makes me verrry curious.
(If I were a proper stalker like I ought to be, I wouldn't be curious. I'd have already read everything you have posted.)

I'm going to compare this chapter to the ginger peach tea I'm drinking. It's a house blend at the coffee shop I frequent. I adore it. It's smooth and has a delicate flavour. But like any black tea, it has that certain taste underneath everything that just makes it perfect.

This chapter has a beautiful, smooth flow to it and the emotions are communicated subtly - giving me, as the reader, a taste of what's going on in Molly's heart without overwhelming me. Or ruining the overall effect. Which ties it in with the rest of the story. Like ginger and peach, it was the perfect combination of Molly with Seb and Molly with Harrison. Coming together to piece together another part of a truly lovely story.
This is a delicious as my tea.

(I truly love this tea.)

xoxo
Shiloh

Author's Response: Cryptic and curious: exactly what I wanted to get across so YAY :D

You make me want to sample this tea now. However, I'm not sure paying thousands of pounds for flights out to you for tea would be my best idea... (I was listening to your foodie review podcast as I wrote that and you started talking about tea at the exact moment. It was quite amazing).

I really value subtlety in writing. I don't like being overloaded when I read something and I don't want anyone to feel that way when they're reading something of mine either.

I'm now going to get tea and biscuits just because of you. Thank you, lovely


xx


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