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Review:The Empress says:
Seb is adorable. I really admire the way you've written these initial feelings. Instead of writing a seventeen year old boy with feelings a thirty year old woman might have, you write it very realistically. I know I'm guilty of adding too much dramatic flair to teenage romance, and we all know it's the trend of contemporary young adult fiction. You, however, capture the somewhat innocent and awkwardness of it without making it seem silly or ridiculous.

The way Seb describes everything I really like. His penchant for exaggeration especially. How Molly "shines brighter" and that Harrison is the "oafish boyfriend". That in itself adds much to the tone of the chapter. And really give insight into how Seb himself is feeling.

Seb ♥

xoxo
Shiloh

Author's Response: He exaggerates sooo much. He's incapable of thinking like a normal human being. Everything gets blown way out of proportion in his mind.

I'm so glad you think he's realistic though. This is going to get its dramatic flair later on in bucketfuls but there'll still be the awkwardness (the innocence will definitely fade :P ).

Seb indeed ♥

Thank you, darliiing!
♥
xx

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