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Review:Sam says:
Please proof read. There were a couple shockers in there. But it still read well and you nailed Hermione and Ron's dialogue there at the end good stuff. But still the world, man, the world! You're too stuck on characters and the plot. Describe the WORLD

Author's Response: Thanks. Two points here:

I see now I need to put in more world description. I think I was influenced by many fanfics repeating what was already described in the originals. I got bored reading some stories going over and over the sorting ceremony, the seating position, they way the food arrives, etc. etc. Anyone reading these fanfics already knows that very well. But I should have put in more other description.

Proof reading. Believe it or not, I reviewed and checked every section as I wrote it 5 to 10 times. Then I beta read the whole 58,000 word story at least 6 to 8 times (2 after it was published.) So it's not for lack of trying. I'll beta read it again, particularly this chapter. That is something I can fix even if I can't rewrite the story better.

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