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Review:Sam says:
`Ok, there were some good moments iin there. But overall I thought it was pretty jerky. The numbers joke was waffle that didn't really excite me. You set up the Seph character well but she didn't really do anything! You can't spend half a chapter setting up a character for nothing! haha... Also the broomsticks thing is a little bit jarring. I don't think they would bother using broomsticks... If they're invisible they'd get on board. if not they certainly wouldn't fly. Not Aurors. No way not in daytime.. Sucked me out of the world you're trying to create. Sticking with you though!

Author's Response: Thanks. Yes, I can see now the numbers thing is poor author-humour not Hermione-humour. I think I was just trying to bring out the difference in Ron & Hermione's characters regarding studying.

As I recall I think I probably thought invisibility would be a liability on a crowded train.

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