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Review:harry_vampire says:
Hey-a!I'm here with your requested review!

After reading through the story...One word came to ma mind Awesome!

Why did u choose this title 'Brusies'?Neways it is your choice:D

There was flow of emotions in every scene!Every scene seemed to perfectly connected.There wasnt any abrupt ending!
The characterisation of Merope is good, you showed her feelings in perfect light...a woman who had been in so much distress!There were some dialogues which needs to be edited but other than that it is really really good:)

Cheers,
Su

9/10

Author's Response: Hi!

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wrote this for a challenge over on MNFF and it was to select a banner which already had a title plus a catchphrase to go with it. We had to write a story based on the banner of our choice. Plus, I thought it was fairly obvious why the title was Bruises -- hence the different definitions of the word etc. Thank you for your review.

~Soraya~


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