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Review:magnolia_magic says:
This is another great chapter! I like the contrast between teenage Fleur and older Fleur--it really shows how much she's grown since her school years. I also like that you don't make Fleur seem vain at all; even when she makes comments about the fact that she's prettier than anyone else, it doesn't feel like conceit. It's more like she just knows exactly who she is. I always felt like Fleur was misunderstood by most people around her, and this story shows a more real side to her that went unexplored in the books, which is refreshing to see.

This is such a cute story! Like I said before, I love your style: the writing is so beautiful and elegant in this (so fitting for a Fleur story!) And I can't remember if I said this in my last review, but Bill/Fleur is one of my favorite pairings. So I will definitely be looking forward to your next update! Thanks so much for requesting! :)

--Maggie

Author's Response: Hi again!

She really has grown, hasn't she? I think your assessment of her is correct -- she's pretty, which is natural for a part Veela, whereas when you think conceited you think of someone who maybe doesn't deserve all of that vanity. I, too, feel like she was a bit misunderstood, and I'm glad you found her to be real.

So happy you're still loving it! I feel like Bill/Fleur is a great pairing and so little addressed in fanfiction. The third and final chapter will be posted in the next few days!

Thanks again :) Your reviews were lovely!

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